From ebee5d88b63eacf9594c22ea28281641959367ff Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 13:17:53 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 01/10] Lam 2:22 "as in the day" corrected to "as on the " Lam 2:22 "as in the day" corrected "as on the day" --- 25-LAM/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/25-LAM/02.usfm b/25-LAM/02.usfm index 88eac8bd..9181506c 100644 --- a/25-LAM/02.usfm +++ b/25-LAM/02.usfm @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ \q My virgins and my vigorous men have fallen by the sword. \q You have slaughtered them in the day of your wrath; you have killed ruthlessly and shown no compassion. \q -\v 22 You have summoned my terrors from all around as in the day of the solemn assembly; +\v 22 You have summoned my terrors from all around as on the day of the solemn assembly; \q no one escaped, and there was no survivor on the day of Yahweh's wrath. \q Those whom I nurtured and raised, my enemy has brought to an end. From 46eeee772877cd3a34b77f5a659290f43f1153e6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 13:40:57 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 02/10] Lam 3:19 change "straying into wormwood" Lam 3:19 change "straying into wormwood" because it is confusing --- 25-LAM/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/25-LAM/03.usfm b/25-LAM/03.usfm index 364d6731..766ddf0f 100644 --- a/25-LAM/03.usfm +++ b/25-LAM/03.usfm @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 I call to mind my affliction and my straying into wormwood and bitterness. +\v 19 I call to mind my affliction and my straying, the wormwood and bitterness. \q \v 20 I certainly call it to mind, and I bow down within myself in despair. \q From 5606dca841107c9660ae10a5f40b63a425ee6d3f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 13:44:51 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 03/10] Lam 3:28 change "sit alone and silent" Lam 3:28 change "sit alone and silent" --- 25-LAM/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/25-LAM/03.usfm b/25-LAM/03.usfm index 766ddf0f..5543be50 100644 --- a/25-LAM/03.usfm +++ b/25-LAM/03.usfm @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ \q \v 27 It is good for a man that he bear the yoke in his youth. \q -\v 28 Let him sit alone and silent, because Yahweh has laid it upon him. +\v 28 Let him sit alone in silence, because Yahweh has laid it upon him. \q \v 29 Let him put his mouth in the dust, and perhaps there may be hope. From 3bd050fe24e408e5214a5fa455267e491ec57006 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 13:46:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 04/10] Update 009.usfm --- 19-PSA/009.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/009.usfm b/19-PSA/009.usfm index f506ed08..ddb05346 100644 --- a/19-PSA/009.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/009.usfm @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 Arise, Yahweh; do not let man conquer us; +\v 19 Arise, Yahweh; do not let man win against you; \q may the nations be judged in your sight. \q \v 20 Terrify them, Yahweh; From caf852bf54884fee53ee561e12ba67d3c03e391f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 13:46:02 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 05/10] Psa 94:8 Split imperative and interrogative clauses. --- 19-PSA/094.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/094.usfm b/19-PSA/094.usfm index 94353e5d..7dd00941 100644 --- a/19-PSA/094.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/094.usfm @@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ \s5 \q -\v 8 Understand, you stupid people; -\q you fools, when will you ever learn? +\v 8 Understand, you stupid people! +\q You fools, when will you ever learn? \q \v 9 He who made the ear, does he not hear? \q He who formed the eye, does he not see? From 3d5ea304b7da8f0d6f8b8efa787a011bd0e0e208 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 13:47:35 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 06/10] magic --- 19-PSA/094.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/094.usfm b/19-PSA/094.usfm index 7dd00941..02a49022 100644 --- a/19-PSA/094.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/094.usfm @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ \q \v 23 He will bring on them their own iniquity \q and will cut them off in their own wickedness. -\q Yahweh our God will cut them off. +\q Yahweh our God will cut them off. From e5bab1d244d95b3474f6778180dbd597cd973e3d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 13:47:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 07/10] magic --- 19-PSA/094.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/094.usfm b/19-PSA/094.usfm index 02a49022..7dd00941 100644 --- a/19-PSA/094.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/094.usfm @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ \q \v 23 He will bring on them their own iniquity \q and will cut them off in their own wickedness. -\q Yahweh our God will cut them off. +\q Yahweh our God will cut them off. From 38eb7a18cc840b4b0473805e469e081eb989592c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 14:00:13 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 08/10] Lam 3:46 pluralized "mouth" Lam 3:46 pluralized "mouth" --- 25-LAM/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/25-LAM/03.usfm b/25-LAM/03.usfm index 5543be50..a671d07d 100644 --- a/25-LAM/03.usfm +++ b/25-LAM/03.usfm @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ \q \v 45 You have made us castoffs and refuse among the peoples. \q -\v 46 All our enemies have opened their mouth mockingly against us. +\v 46 All our enemies have opened their mouths mockingly against us. \q \v 47 Fear of the pit has come upon us, desolation and crushing." From ea7c33f8650b402b39a95e3b56e8d9afa7aa59bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 14:02:53 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 09/10] Lam 4:3 pluralized "ostriches" Lam 4:3 pluralized "ostriches" --- 25-LAM/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/25-LAM/04.usfm b/25-LAM/04.usfm index cb6e09a0..9f5ecab2 100644 --- a/25-LAM/04.usfm +++ b/25-LAM/04.usfm @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 3 Even the jackals reveal the breast to nurse their cubs, but -\q the daughter of my people is as cruel as the ostrich in the desert. +\q the daughter of my people is as cruel as ostriches in the desert. \s5 From e563a5aec54d942c2c563a83a961d8fffb369983 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 14:04:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 10/10] Lam 4:15 change comma to exclamation mark Lam 4:15 change comma to exclamation mark after second word in verse. --- 25-LAM/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/25-LAM/04.usfm b/25-LAM/04.usfm index 9f5ecab2..91c85f49 100644 --- a/25-LAM/04.usfm +++ b/25-LAM/04.usfm @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ \v 14 Those prophets and priests now wander like blind men in the streets. They are defiled by that blood \q so no one is able to even touch their clothes. \q -\v 15 "Flee! Unclean," these prophets and priests cry out. "Flee, flee! Do not touch us!" +\v 15 "Flee! Unclean!" these prophets and priests cry out. "Flee, flee! Do not touch us!" \q So they wander to other lands, but even the Gentiles say, "They can no longer live here as foreigners." \s5