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-\v 1 Dear Titus,
-\p This is Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ. I work to help God's people trust him more. God chose us all to be his people and I work to help them truly know how to live in a way that pleases God.
+\v 1 I, Paul, write this letter. 
+\p This is Paul, who is a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ. I work to help God's people trust him more. God chose us all to be his people and I work to help them truly know how to live in a way that pleases God.
 \v 2 His people can learn how to live like this, because they are confident that God will cause them to live forever. God tells no lies. Even before the world began, he promised to cause us to live forever.
 \v 3 Then, at the right time, he made his word plain for all to understand because he trusted me to preach this message. I do this in order to obey the command of God, who saves us.
 
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-\v 4 Titus, you are like a son to me because we both believe in Jesus Christ. May God the Father and Christ Jesus our Savior continue to be kind to you and to give you peace.
+\v 4 I am writing to you, Titus, because you are like a son to me because we both believe in Jesus Christ. May God the Father and Christ Jesus our Savior continue to be kind to you and to give you peace.
 \v 5 I left you on the Island of Crete for this reason; that you do the work that has been unfinished and also appoint elders for the group of believers in every city, just as I told you to do.
 
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