From Perry Oakes taking out the passive voice in the UDB
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\q1 The people are anguished and in pain
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\q1 The people are anguished and in pain
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\q2 like a woman experiences who is about to give birth.
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\q2 like a woman experiences who is about to give birth.
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\q1
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\q1
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\v 25 How can it be that the famous city has not yet been abandoned?
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\v 25 But even now the people of that famous city have not yet abandoned it.
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\q That was the city that gave me joy.
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That was the city that gave me joy.
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\s5
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\q1
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\q1
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\q1 "I will cause an army to advance to attack Kedar
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\q1 "I will cause an army to advance to attack Kedar
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\q2 and destroy those people who live east of Judah.
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\q2 and destroy those people who live east of Judah.
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\q1
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\q1
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\v 29 Their tents and their flocks of sheep will be captured.
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\v 29 Enemies will capture their tents and their flocks of sheep.
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\q2 The curtains in their tents and their camels and their other possessions will be taken away.
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\q2 They will take away the curtains of their tents, their camels, and all of their other possessions.
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\q1 Everywhere men will shout,
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\q1 Everywhere men will shout,
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\q2 'We are terrified because terrible things are happening all around us!'
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\q2 'We are terrified because terrible things are happening all around us!'
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