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10-2SA/12.usfm

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 \v 29 So David gathered all his troops. They went to Rabbah, attacked it, and captured it.
-\v 30 Then David took the crown from the head of their king and put it on his own head. It was very heavy; it weighed about thirty-four kilograms, and it had a very valuable stone in it. His soldiers also took many other valuable things from the city.
+\v 30 Then David took the crown from the head of their king and put it on his own head. It was very heavy; it weighed about thirty-three kilograms, and it had a very valuable stone in it. His soldiers also took many other valuable things from the city.
 
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 \v 31 Then they brought the people out of the city and forced them to work for them, using saws, iron picks, and axes. David's troops also forced them to make bricks. David's soldiers did this in all the cities of the Ammonites. Then David and all of his army returned to Jerusalem.

11-1KI/20.usfm

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 \v 38 Then the prophet put a large bandage over his face so that no one would recognize him. Then he went and stood alongside the road, waiting for the king to come by.
 
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-\v 39 When the king passed by, the prophet cried out to him, saying "Your Majesty, after I was wounded while I was fighting in a battle, a soldier brought to me one of our enemies who he had captured, and said to me, 'Guard this man! If he escapes, you must pay me thirty-four kilograms of silver; if you do not pay that, you will be executed!'
+\v 39 When the king passed by, the prophet cried out to him, saying "Your Majesty, after I was wounded while I was fighting in a battle, a soldier brought to me one of our enemies who he had captured, and said to me, 'Guard this man! If he escapes, you must pay me thirty-three kilograms of silver; if you do not pay that, you will be executed!'
 \v 40 But while I was busy doing other things, the man escaped!" The king of Israel said to him, "That is your problem! You yourself have said that you deserve to be punished."
 
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13-1CH/20.usfm

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 \v 1 In that region, kings usually went with their armies to fight their enemies in the springtime. But the following year, David did not do that. Instead, he stayed in Jerusalem, and he sent his commander Joab to lead the army. Joab took his troops. They crossed the Jordan River and ruined the land of the Ammon people group. Then they went to Rabbah, the capital city, and surrounded it. David stayed in Jerusalem for a while. But later he took more troops and went to help Joab. Their armies attacked Rabbah and destroyed it.
 
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-\v 2 Then David took the crown from the head of the king of Rabbah and put it on his own head. It was very heavy; it weighed thirty-four kilograms, and it had many very valuable stones. They also took many other valuable things from the city.
+\v 2 Then David took the crown from the head of the king of Rabbah and put it on his own head. It was very heavy; it weighed thirty-three kilograms, and it had many very valuable stones. They also took many other valuable things from the city.
 \v 3 Then they brought the people out of the city and forced them to work for their army, using saws and iron picks and axes. David's soldiers did this in all the cities of the Ammon people group. Then David and all of his army returned to Jerusalem.
 
 

14-2CH/36.usfm

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 \v 2 Jehoahaz was twenty-three years old when he became the king, but he ruled from Jerusalem for only three months.
 
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-\v 3 The king of Egypt captured him and prevented him from ruling any longer. He also forced the people of Judah to pay to him a tax of four metric tons of silver and thirty-four kilograms of gold.
+\v 3 The king of Egypt captured him and prevented him from ruling any longer. He also forced the people of Judah to pay to him a tax of four metric tons of silver and thirty-three kilograms of gold.
 \v 4 The king of Egypt appointed Jehoahaz's younger brother Eliakim to be the king of Judah. He changed Eliakim's name to Jehoiakim. But Neco seized Jehoahaz and took him to Egypt.
 
 

25-LAM/04.usfm

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 \v 6 The people of Sodom died very suddenly in a disaster.
 \q2 But God punished my people
 \q2 more severely than the people of Sodom,
-\q and there was no one to rescue us.
+\q and no one was concerned about all that we suffered.
 
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 \q1 Their bodies were healthy,
 \q2 pink like coral and brilliant like sapphires.
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-\v 8 Our leaders faces are blacker than soot,
+\v 8 Our leaders' faces are blacker than soot,
 \q2 and no one recognizes them when they walk in the streets.
-\q1 Their skin was shriveled and it hung on their bones,
-\q2 and it became as dry as a stick of wood.
+\q1 Their skin has shriveled and it hangs on their bones,
+\q2 and it has become as dry as a stick of wood.
 
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67-REV/16.usfm

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 \v 20 Also as a result of the earthquake, every island disappeared, and the mountains became flat land.
-\v 21 Huge hailstones, each weighing about thirty-four kilograms, fell from the sky onto the people. Then people blasphemed God because he had punished them in this terrible way, and because the hailstones were very large.
+\v 21 Huge hailstones, each weighing about thirty-three kilograms, fell from the sky onto the people. Then people blasphemed God because he had punished them in this terrible way, and because the hailstones were very large.