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@@ -10,15 +10,11 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "God made the eternal
 
 "we solemnly tell others about him"
 
-# the eternal life
+# the eternal life, which was with the Father, and which has been made known to us
 
-Here, "the eternal life" refers to the one who gives that life, Jesus. Alternate translation: "the one who enables us to live forever" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
-
-# which was with the Father
-
-"who was with God the Father"
+Here, "the eternal life" refers to the one who gives that life, Jesus. Alternate translation: "the one who enables us to live forever, who was with God the Father, and who has been made known to us" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # and which has been made known to us
 
-This was when he lived on earth. Alternate translation: "and he came to live among us" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+This was when he lived on earth. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "and which the Father has made known to us" or "and who came to live among us" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])