From aa018d79b717bf81dad742e0f0fe158574e34592 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 19:05:59 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Reworded "heart" note, added "heart" to tW list --- php/04/04.md | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/php/04/04.md b/php/04/04.md index d828ee691d..cbabdb7368 100644 --- a/php/04/04.md +++ b/php/04/04.md @@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ Possible meanings are 1) The Lord Jesus is near to the believers in spirit or 2) "which is more than we can understand" -# will guard your hearts and your thoughts +# will guard your hearts and your thoughts in Christ -This presents God's peace as a soldier who protects our emotions and thoughts from worrying. AT: "will be like a soldier and guard your emotions and thoughts from worrying about the troubles of this life" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +This presents God's peace as a soldier who protects our hearts and thoughts from worrying. Here "hearts" is a metonym for a person's emotions. AT: "will be like a soldier and guard your emotions and thoughts in Christ" or "will protect you in Christ and will keep you from worrying about the troubles of this life" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # translationWords @@ -28,4 +28,5 @@ This presents God's peace as a soldier who protects our emotions and thoughts fr * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/lord]] * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/pray]] * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/peace]] -* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/god]] \ No newline at end of file +* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/god]] +* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/heart]] \ No newline at end of file