From a486420e7e98bdd09acadf16a3efea2ec5c793ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2018 15:19:27 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] UDB updates --- 1ti/05/12.md | 3 --- act/02/46.md | 4 ++-- act/12/20.md | 4 ++-- act/18/12.md | 11 ++++++----- eph/04/04.md | 4 ++-- jas/03/06.md | 9 +++------ php/02/19.md | 2 +- 7 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/1ti/05/12.md b/1ti/05/12.md index a02a2c7369..5c365deb7f 100644 --- a/1ti/05/12.md +++ b/1ti/05/12.md @@ -6,6 +6,3 @@ The commitment of the widows was their agreement to serve the Christian community for the rest of their lives if the community would supply the widows' needs. -# togexx - -emphasizes together \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/act/02/46.md b/act/02/46.md index 67c30e2044..1d4376c943 100644 --- a/act/02/46.md +++ b/act/02/46.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ You may need to supply the words that have been omitted in this ellipse. What th This phrase translates a word that speaks of people who agree with each other and who work together to accomplish a common purpose. -# they broke bread in homes +# They also broke bread in homes -Bread was part of their meals. Alternate translation: "they eat meals together in their homes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) +Bread was part of their meals. Alternate translation: "They also ate meals together in their homes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) # with glad and humble hearts diff --git a/act/12/20.md b/act/12/20.md index 8ab93b6241..67d433b01f 100644 --- a/act/12/20.md +++ b/act/12/20.md @@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ Here the word "They" is a generalization. It is unlikely that all the people of This phrase translates a word that speaks of people who agree with each other and who work together to accomplish a common purpose. -# They persuaded Blastus +# after persuading Blastus -"These men persuaded Blastus" +"after these men persuaded Blastus" # Blastus diff --git a/act/18/12.md b/act/18/12.md index 3c7beaf999..757d46326b 100644 --- a/act/18/12.md +++ b/act/18/12.md @@ -14,14 +14,15 @@ This is the name of a man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) This stands for the Jewish leaders that did not believe in Jesus. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) -# rose up together +# rose up -"came together" or "joined together" +This phrase means that the Jews began to act, not that they rose into the air or rose to stand from a sitting position. If your language has a different idiom for beginning to act, you may use it here. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/idiom]]) + +# with one mind + +This phrase translates a word that speaks of people who agree with each other and who work together to accomplish a common purpose. # brought him before the judgment seat The Jews took Paul by force to bring Paul before the court. Here "judgment seat" refers to the place where Gallio sat when he made legal decisions in court. Alternate translation: "took him so that the governor could judge him at the judgment seat" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) -# togexx - -emphasizes together, one mind, one purpose. Does not just mean they all acted at the same time. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/eph/04/04.md b/eph/04/04.md index c3bcd6aa63..61a4c0a175 100644 --- a/eph/04/04.md +++ b/eph/04/04.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ The church is often referred to as the body of Christ. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/tr "only one Holy Spirit" -# you were called in one certain hope of your calling +# you were called in one hope of your calling -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "God called you to have one confident hope in your calling" or "there is one thing that God also chose you to be confident in and expect him to do" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "there is one thing that God also chose you to be confident in and expect him to do" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) diff --git a/jas/03/06.md b/jas/03/06.md index b369ec2e75..8536809fb5 100644 --- a/jas/03/06.md +++ b/jas/03/06.md @@ -6,18 +6,15 @@ The tongue is a metonym for what people say. James calls it a fire because of th The enormous effects of sinful speaking are spoken of as if they were a world by themselves. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# It stains the whole body +# The tongue stains the whole body -Sinful speaking is spoken of metaphorically as if it stained one's body. And becoming unacceptable to God is spoken of as if it were dirt on the body. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +The writer speaks metaphorically of the way a person becomes unacceptable to God when he speaks sinful words as if the person's words made stains on his body. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # sets on fire the course of life The phrase "course of life" refers to a person's entire life. Alternate translation: "it ruins a person's entire life" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# life. It is itself set on fire by hell +# life, and is itself set on fire by hell The word "itself" refers to the tongue. Also, here "hell" refers to the powers of evil or to the devil. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "life because the devil uses it for evil" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# Pending 1908 - -[1908](https://git.door43.org/WycliffeAssociates/en_ulb/issues/1908) \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/php/02/19.md b/php/02/19.md index 0d0e7d0460..34dc4fdf48 100644 --- a/php/02/19.md +++ b/php/02/19.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Paul tells the Philippian believers about his plan to send Timothy soon and that they should treat Epaphroditus as special. -# But I have hope in the Lord Jesus +# But I hope in the Lord Jesus "But I confidently expect the Lord Jesus to allow me"