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rev/07/05.md

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 "12,000 people from the tribe" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
 
+# twelve thousand from ... Judah were sealed
+
+This can be translated in active form. See how you translated similar words in [verse 4](./04.md). Alternate translation: "God's angel marked twelve thousand from ... Judah" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

rev/09/20.md

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 This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "those whom the plagues had not killed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
+# the works of their hands
+
+The word "hand" here is a metonym for the person whose hands they are. Alternate translation: "the deeds they had done" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+
 # things that cannot see, hear, or walk
 
 This phrase reminds us that idols are not alive and do not deserve to be worshiped. But the people did not stop worshiping them. Alternate translation: "even though idols cannot see, hear, or walk" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-distinguish]])

rev/10/04.md

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 The word "voice" refers to words spoken by someone other than the angel. Alternate translation: "but I heard someone speaking from heaven" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
 
+# Seal up
+
+People in John's day would write a message on a scroll and then seal the scroll so that only the person whom the writers wanted to open it were able to open it. This is a metaphor for keeping something secret. Alternate translation: "Keep secret" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])