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 #### Outline of Daniel ####
 
-1. The time and place of the Book of Daniel; the first trials and tests of the exiles (1:1–21)
+1. Daniel and his friends in the court of Nebuchadnezzar (1:1–21)
-1. The dream of Nebuchadnezzar and its interpretation (2:1–49)
+1. Daniel interprets Nebuchadnezzar's first dream (2:1–49)
-1. The golden image, the fiery furnace, and deliverance (3:1–30)
+1. Daniel's friends delivered from the fiery furnace (3:1–30)
-1. Deciphering Nebuchadnezzar's dream; his fall from power (4:1–37)
+1. Daniel interprets Nebuchadnezzar's second dream (4:1–37)
-1. Belshazzar's feast and the writing on the wall; Daniel in the lions' den (5:1–6:28)
+1. Belshazzar's feast and the writing on the wall (5:1-31)
-1. The vision of the four beasts (7:1–28)
+1. Daniel in the den of lions (6:1–28)
-1. The vision of the ram and the goat (8:1–27)
+1. Daniel's vision of four beasts (7:1–28)
-1. Daniel's prayer and Gabriel's answer (9:1–23)
+1. Daniel's vision of a ram and goat (8:1–27)
-1. The vision of the seventy weeks (9:24–27)
+1. Daniel prays and Gabriel answers (9:1–23)
+1. Daniel's vision of seventy weeks (9:24–27)
 1. Daniel's vision of a man (10:1–11:1)
 1. The kings of the South and the North (11:2–20)
-1. A contemptible person rises up, until the desolation is completed (11:21–12:4)
+1. An evil king exalts himself (11:21-39)
-1. The time of the end (12:5–13)
+1. The time of the end (11:40–12:13)
 
 #### What is the Book of Daniel about? ####
 
-The Book of Daniel is about several Jewish young men, Daniel and his friends, who were taken to Babylon as prisoners from Jerusalem. The first section of the book (Chapters 1–6) is a narrative about Daniel and his friends. This section shows how they were faithful to Yahweh even though they were living in a pagan land and serving a pagan king. And it shows how God rewarded them because they were faithful. 
+The first part of the Book of Daniel (Chapters 1–6) is a narrative about Daniel and his friends. They were young men from Jerusalem who were taken to Babylon as prisoners. These chapters tell how they were faithful to Yahweh while living in a pagan land and serving a pagan king. And it tells how God rewarded them because they were faithful. 
 
-Following this is a section of prophetic visions (Chapters 7–12). Chapters 7 and 8 deal with images representing the kingdoms and kings of the major nations. Chapters 9–11 are prophecies and visions about wars and the appearance of a type of the great enemy of God. Chapter 12 is a final vision that describes the end times.
+The rest of the Book of Daniel is a series of prophetic visions. Chapters 7 and 8 deal with images representing the kingdoms and kings of the major nations. Chapters 9–11 are prophecies and visions about wars and a type of the great enemy of God appearing. Chapter 12 is a vision that describes end times.
 
 #### How should the title of this book be translated? ####
 
-"The Book of Daniel" may also be called "The Book About Daniel" or "The Book About the Deeds and Visions of Daniel." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+The traditional title of this book is "The Book of Daniel" or just "Daniel." Translators may call it "The Book About Daniel" or "The Book About the Deeds and Visions of Daniel." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 #### Who wrote the Book of Daniel? ####
 
-Daniel was a Jew who became an official in the Babylonian government during the exile. He may have written the book himself. Or he may have written the parts of the book and someone put them together at a later time in the form that we have now.
+Daniel was a Jew who became a Babylonian government official during the exile. He may have written the book himself. Or he may have written the parts of the book and someone else put the parts together at a later time.
 
 ## Part 2: Important Religious and Cultural Concepts ##
 
 #### Why is there a missing week in Daniel's prophecy? ####
 
-There is much speculation regarding Daniel's "missing week" in 9:24-27. It is best for translators to allow this mystery to remain in the text. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-apocalypticwriting]])
+Scholars disagree about what appears to be a "missing week" in 9:24-27. It is best for translators to allow this mystery to remain in the text. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-apocalypticwriting]])
 
 #### When do the seventy weeks begin? ####
 
-An exact date for the beginning of the prophecy of the seventy weeks is unknown. The timeline begins when a decree is issued to rebuild the city of Jerusalem, but there were several decrees that allowed this to happen.
+The seventy weeks in 9:24-27 begins when a decree is issued to rebuild the city of Jerusalem. But there were several decrees that allowed this to happen.
 
 #### Who was Darius the Mede? ####
 
-Darius the Mede was a king of Babylon who sent Daniel into the lion's den. Unfortunately, his name is not known in history outside of The Book of Daniel. Many explanations about who Darius was have been suggested, but they are not certain.
+Darius the Mede was a Babylonian king who sent Daniel into a den of lions. People have not found his name in history outside of The Book of Daniel. Scholars have tried to explain who Darius was, but they are not certain.
 
 ## Part 3: Important Translation Issues ##
 
 #### How does Daniel use the word "king"? ####
 
-There are many kings in the Book of Daniel, but not all of the kings were rulers over all of Babylon or Persia. Some of the kings may have been kings of regions or cities.
+Many kings are in the Book of Daniel, but not all of the kings ruled over all of Babylon or Persia. Some of the kings may have ruled over regions or cities.
 
 #### How many chapters does Daniel have? ####
 
-Daniel has twelve chapters. Some Bible versions include the stories called "Bel and the Dragon" and "The Prayer of Azariah." However, not many people think that these stories are equal in authority with the rest of scripture. Therefore, there is no need to translate them.
+Daniel has twelve chapters. Some Bible versions include stories called "Bel and the Dragon" and "The Prayer of Azariah." However, few people think that these stories have the same authority as the rest of scripture. Therefore, there is no need to translate them.