Fixed mismatches from ULB updates
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# They were filled with
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This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "They were" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
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# Merari
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See how you translated this man's name in [1 Chronicles 26:10](../26/10.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
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# No one is ruler over his breath so as to stop the breath ... no one has power over the day of his death
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# No one has power over the wind to restrain it ... no one has power over the day of his death
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Just as no one has the ability to stop himself from breathing, no one can continue living when it is time to die. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
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# No one is ruler
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The word "ruler" can be expressed as a verb. Alternate translation: "No one has control"
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Just as no one has the ability to stop the wind from blowing, no one can continue living when it is time to die. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
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# the day of his death
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See how you translated this in [Song of Songs 2:16](../02/16.md).
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# dripping liquid myrrh
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# dripping with myrrh
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"that drip with the best myrrh." His lips are moist and have a wonderful smell like myrrh. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
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The man continues describing what he would like to do with the woman.
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# May your palate be like the best wine
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# May your mouth be like the best wine
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The palate is a metonym for the lips. Wine tastes good. The man wants to kiss the woman's lips. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
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The mouth is a metonym for the lips. Wine tastes good. The man wants to kiss the woman's lips. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
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# flowing smoothly for my beloved
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The wall is a metaphor for a woman with small breasts. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
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# my breasts are now like fortress towers
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# my breasts were now like fortress towers
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Fortress towers are tall. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
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