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jer/02/32.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ God uses this question to introduce the idea of remembering things that are impo
 
 # Will a virgin forget her jewelry, a bride her sash
 
-The words "will" and "forget" are understood to be part of the second phrase also. Alternate translation: "Will a virgin forget her jewelry, and will a bride forget her veils" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+The words "will" and "forget" are understood to be part of the second phrase also. Alternate translation: "Will a virgin forget her jewelry, and will a bride forget her sash" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
 
 # sash
 

jer/04/20.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Enemies have suddenly
 
 # my curtains in a moment
 
-The words "are destroyed" are understood from the previous phrase. Alternate translation: "my curtains are destroyed in a moment" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+The words "are destroyed" are understood from the previous phrase. Alternate translation: "my curtains are destroyed in a moment" or "and enemies have destroyed my curtains in a moment" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
 
 # my curtains
 

jer/12/05.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ This rhetorical question implies that he would not be able to run with horses. T
 
 # If you fall down
 
-This refers to while the person is running. Alternate translation: "If you fall down while running" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+This refers to while the person is running. Alternate translation: "If you fall down while running" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # the safe countryside
 

jer/18/21.md

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ Here the word "hands" represents power. Alternate translation: "cause those who
 
 # their men be killed
 
-The verb may be supplied from the previous phrase. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "let people kill their men" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+The verb may be supplied from the previous phrase. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "let their men be killed" or "let people kill their men" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
 # their young men killed by the sword in battle
 
-The verb may be supplied from the previous phrase. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "let people kill their young men with swords in battle" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+The verb may be supplied from the previous phrase. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "let their young men be killed by the sword in battle" or "let people kill their young men with swords in battle" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 

jer/19/13.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # of the kings of Judah
 
-The words "the houses" may be supplied here. Alternate translation: "the houses of the kings of Judah" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+"the houses of the kings of Judah"
 
 # the unclean people
 

jer/22/18.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # They will not lament for him
 
-In verse 18, Yahweh stops speaking directly to Jehoiakim and begins to speak to other people. Here "lament" refers to grieving at Jehoiakim's death. Alternate translation: "They will not lament for Jehoiakim when he dies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+In verse 18, Yahweh stops speaking directly to Jehoiakim and begins to speak to other people. Here "lament" refers to grieving at Jehoiakim's death. Alternate translation: "They will not lament for Jehoiakim when he dies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # Woe, my brother! ... Woe, my sister! ... Woe, master! ... Woe, majesty!
 

jer/36/19.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Jeremiah, too
 
-You may need to make this a complete sentence. Alternate translation: "Jeremiah should hide himself, too" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+You may need to make this a complete sentence. Alternate translation: "hide Jeremiah, too" or "Jeremiah should hide himself, too" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
 
 # where you are
 

jer/45/01.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# this was in the fourth year of Jehoiakim son of Josiah
+# in the fourth year of Jehoiakim son of Josiah
 
-This information can be placed at the beginning of 45:1 as in the UDB.
+This information can be placed at the beginning of 45:1, as in the UDB.
 
 # in the fourth year of Jehoiakim
 

jer/49/14.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Yahweh has sent out a
 
 # to the nations, 'Gather together ... for battle.'
 
-It is understood "Gather together" is the beginning of the messenger's message. Alternate translation: "to tell the nations, 'Gather together ... for battle.'" or "to the nations, and he will tell them, 'Gather together ... for battle.'" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+It is understood "Gather together" is the beginning of the messenger's message. Alternate translation: "to tell the nations, 'Gather together ... for battle.'" or "to the nations, and he will tell them, 'Gather together ... for battle.'" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # attack her