The "sight" of Yahweh represents Yahweh's judgment or evaluation. See how you translated this in [1 Kings 11:6](../11/05.md). Alternate translation: "what was evil in Yahweh's judgment" or "what Yahweh considered to be evil" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
The abstract noun "jealousy" can be translated as an adjective. Alternate translation: "they made him jealous" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])