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neh/04/16.md

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-# What the young men do?
+# What were the young men doing?
 
-Half worked on rebuilding the wall and half held their weapons and wore armor.
+Half of them were working on rebuilding the wall and half of them were holding their weapons and armor.

neh/05/01.md

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 # Why did the men and women raise a great outcry against their fellow Jews?
 
-They raised an outcry because they had to mortgage their property and sell their children for food, yet the nobles and the prefects were lending interest against them.
+They raised an outcry because some of them had to mortgage their property in order to get grain, some of them had to put their children in bondage as slaves, and some of them had to borrow silver in order to pay the kings taxes on their fields and vineyards.
+
+

neh/05/02.md

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 # Why did the men and women raise a great outcry against their fellow Jews?
 
-They raised an outcry because they had to mortgage their property and sell their children for food, yet the nobles and the prefects were lending interest against them.
+They raised an outcry because some of them had to mortgage their property in order to get grain, some of them had to put their children in bondage as slaves, and some of them had to borrow silver in order to pay the kings taxes on their fields and vineyards.

neh/05/03.md

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 # Why did the men and women raise a great outcry against their fellow Jews?
 
-They raised an outcry because they had to mortgage their property and sell their children for food, yet the nobles and the prefects were lending interest against them.
+They raised an outcry because some of them had to mortgage their property in order to get grain, some of them had to put their children in bondage as slaves, and some of them had to borrow silver in order to pay the kings taxes on their fields and vineyards.

neh/05/04.md

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 # Why did the men and women raise a great outcry against their fellow Jews?
 
-They raised an outcry because they had to mortgage their property and sell their children for food, yet the nobles and the prefects were lending interest against them.
+They raised an outcry because some of them had to mortgage their property in order to get grain, some of them had to put their children in bondage as slaves, and some of them had to borrow silver in order to pay the kings taxes on their fields and vineyards.

neh/05/05.md

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 # Why did the men and women raise a great outcry against their fellow Jews?
 
-They raised an outcry because they had to mortgage their property and sell their children for food, yet the nobles and the prefects were lending interest against them.
+They raised an outcry because some of them had to mortgage their property in order to get grain, some of them had to put their children in bondage as slaves, and some of them had to borrow silver in order to pay the kings taxes on their fields and vineyards.

neh/05/07.md

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-# Why did the men and women raise a great outcry against their fellow Jews?
+# What did Nehemiah do when he heard the outcry of the Jewish men and women against their fellow Jews?
+
+He contended with the nobles and with the prefects and said to them, "You are lending interest, a man against his brother!" And he put forth a great assembly against them.
 
-They raised an outcry because they had to mortgage their property and sell their children for food, yet the nobles and the prefects were lending interest against them.