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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ There are different types of information that may be given at the end of a story
 #### The following are purposes for end of story information:
 
 * to summarize the story
-* to give a comment about what happened in the story
+* to give a conclusion about what the story means or what is important about it
 * to connect a smaller story to the larger story it is a part of
 * to tell the reader what happens to a specific character after the main part of the story ends
 * to tell on-going action that continues after the main part of the story ends
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Different languages have different ways of presenting these kinds of information
 
 > Then the rest of the men should follow, some on planks, and some on other things from the ship. **In this way it happened that all of us were brought safely to the land.** (Acts 27:44 ULT)
 
-* To give a comment about what happened in the story
+* To give a conclusion about what the story means or what is important about it
 
 > Many of those who practiced magical arts brought their books together and burned them in the sight of everyone. Then they counted the value of them, and found it was 50,000 pieces of silver. **So the word of the Lord was spreading and prevailing with power.** (Acts 19:19-20 ULT)