edits to translate-textvariants (#461)

edits to translate-textvariants

Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_ta/pulls/461
Co-Authored-By: Perry J Oakes <pjoakes@noreply.door43.org>
Co-Committed-By: Perry J Oakes <pjoakes@noreply.door43.org>

translate/translate-textvariants/01.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ### Description
 
-Thousands of years ago, people wrote the books of the Bible. Other people then copied them by hand and translated them. They did this work very carefully, and over the years many people made thousands of copies. However, people who looked at them later saw that there were small differences between them. Some copiers accidentally left out some words, or some mistook one word for another that looked like it. Occasionally, they added words or even whole sentences, either by accident or because they wanted to explain something. Modern Bibles are translations of the old copies. Some modern Bibles have some of these sentences that were added. In the ULT, these added sentences are usually written in footnotes.
+Thousands of years ago, people wrote the books of the Bible. Other people then copied them by hand and translated them. They did this work very carefully, and over the years many people made thousands of copies. However, people who looked at them later saw that there were small differences between them. Some copiers accidentally left out some words, or some mistook one word for another that looked like it. Occasionally, they added words or even whole sentences, either by accident or because they wanted to explain something. Modern Bibles are translations of the old copies. Some modern Bibles include some of these sentences that were added. In the ULT, these added sentences are usually written in footnotes.
 
 Bible scholars have read many old copies and compared them with each other. For each place in the Bible where there was a difference, they have figured out which wordings are most likely correct. The translators of the ULT based the ULT on wordings that scholars say are most likely correct. Because people who use the ULT may have access to Bibles that are based on other copies, the ULT translators have sometimes included information about some of the differences between them, either in the ULT footnotes or in the unfoldingWord® Translation Notes.
 
@@ -12,21 +12,21 @@ Matthew 18:10-11 ULT has a footnote about verse 11.
 
 > <sup> 10</sup> See that you do not despise one of these little ones. For I say to you that in heaven their angels always look on the face of my Father who is in heaven. <sup>11</sup> <sup> [1]</sup>
 >
-> <sup> [1]</sup> Many authorities, some ancient, insert v. 11. **For the Son of Man came to save that which was lost.**
+> <sup> [1]</sup> Many authorities, some ancient, insert v. 11: **For the Son of Man came to save that which was lost.**
 
 John 7:53-8:11 is not in the best earliest manuscripts. It has been included in the ULT, but it is marked off with square brackets ([ ]) at the beginning and end, and there is a footnote after verse 11.
 
-> 53 \[Then everyone went to his own house … 11 She said, “No one, Lord.” Jesus said, “Neither do I condemn you. Go and sin no more.”\] \[2\]
+> 53 \[Then everyone went to his own house … 11 She said, “No one, Lord.” Jesus said, “Neither do I condemn you. Go and sin no more.”\] <sup> [2]</sup>
 >
-> \[2\] Some ancient manuscripts include John 7:53-8:11
+> <sup> [2]</sup> Some ancient manuscripts include John 7:53-8:11
 
 ### Translation Strategies
 
 When there is a textual variant, you may choose to follow the ULT or another version that you have access to.
 
-(1) Translate the verses that the ULT does and include the footnote that the ULT provides.
+(1) Translate the verses as they are in the ULT and include the footnote that the ULT provides.
 
-(2) Translate the verses as another version does, and change the footnote so that it fits this situation.
+(2) Translate the verses as another version has them, and change the footnote so that it fits this situation.
 
 ### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied
 
@@ -34,16 +34,16 @@ The translation strategies are applied to Mark 7:14-16 ULT, which has a footnote
 
 > <sup>14</sup> He called the crowd again and said to them, “Listen to me, all of you, and understand. <sup>15</sup> There is nothing from outside the man that can defile him when it enters into him. But the things that come out of the man are the things that defile the man.” <sup>16 [1]</sup>
 
-> <sup> [1]</sup> Some ancient manuscripts include verse 16. If any man has ears to hear, let him hear.
+> <sup> [1]</sup> Some ancient manuscripts include verse 16: **If any man has ears to hear, let him hear.**
 
-(1) Translate the verses that the ULT does and include the footnote that the ULT provides.
+(1) Translate the verses as they are in the ULT and include the footnote that the ULT provides.
 
 > <sup>14</sup> He called the crowd again and said to them, “Listen to me, all of you, and understand. <sup>15</sup> There is nothing from outside the man that can defile him when it enters into him. But the things that come out of the man are the things that defile the man.” <sup>16 [1]</sup>
 >
-> > Some ancient manuscripts include verse 16. If any man has ears to hear, let him hear.
+> > <sup> [1]</sup> Some ancient manuscripts include verse 16: **If any man has ears to hear, let him hear.**
 
-(2) Translate the verses as another version does, and change the footnote so that it fits this situation.
+(2) Translate the verses as another version has them, and change the footnote so that it fits this situation.
 
 > <sup>14</sup> He called the crowd again and said to them, “Listen to me, all of you, and understand. <sup>15</sup>There is nothing from outside the man that can defile him when it enters into him. But the things that come out of the man are the things that defile the man. <sup>16</sup> If any man has ears to hear, let him hear.” <sup> [1]</sup>
 >
-> > <sup> [1]</sup> Some ancient manuscripts include verse 16.
+> > <sup> [1]</sup> Some ancient manuscripts do not include verse 16.