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 ### Description
 
-A metaphor is a figure of speech in which one concept (the "image") stands for another concept (the "topic"). That is, the topic is spoken of as if it were the image. For example, someone might say,
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-* The girl I love is a red rose.
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-Here the topic is "the girl I love," and the image is "a red rose." The girl is spoken of as if she were a red rose.
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-Anything in a language can serve as a metaphor. For example, verb forms can be used in unusual ways, as in,
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-* The Apostle Paul tells us that Christians will rise to life again.
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-In this case, the English present tense form "tells" is a metaphor for the past tense form "told," because the Apostle Paul lived long ago.
+A metaphor is a figure of speech in which one concept is used for another, and in which there is at least one point of comparison between the two. In other words, in metaphor, someone speaks of one thing as if it were a different thing because he wants people to think about how those two things are alike. 
 
 Sometimes speakers use metaphors that are very common in their language. However, sometimes speakers use metaphors that are uncommon, and even some metaphors that are unique.
 
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 1. **Topic** - The thing someone speaks of is called the topic.
 1. **Image** - The thing he calls it is the image.
-1. **Points of Comparison** - The ways in which the author claims that the topic and image are similar in some manner are their points of comparison.
+1. **Points of Comparison** - The ways in which the author claims that the topic and image are similar are their points of comparison.
 
 In the metaphor below, the speaker describes the woman he loves as a red rose. The woman (his "love") is the **topic**, and "red rose" is the **image**. Beauty and delicacy are the points of comparison that the speaker sees as similarities between both the topic and image. Note, however, that a rose's beauty is not identical to a woman's beauty. Neither are the two kinds of delicacy the same. So these points of comparison are not built upon identical characteristics, but rather upon characteristics that are seen by the writer as similar in some way.