diff --git a/translate/figs-declarative/01.md b/translate/figs-declarative/01.md index ab1571d2..8c2e7d9a 100644 --- a/translate/figs-declarative/01.md +++ b/translate/figs-declarative/01.md @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ A statement can also be used to give **instructions**. The speaker below was not A statement can also be used to make a **request**. The man with leprosy was not just saying what Jesus was able to do. He was also asking Jesus to heal him. -> Behold, a leper came to him and bowed before him, saying, “Lord, if you are willing, **you can make me clean**.” (Matthew 8:2 ULT) +> Behold, a leper came to him and bowed before him, saying, “Lord, if you are willing, **you are able to make me clean**.” (Matthew 8:2 ULT) A statement can also be used to **perform** something. By telling Adam that the ground was cursed because of him, God actually cursed it. @@ -50,13 +50,13 @@ The phrase “you will call his name Jesus” is an instruction. It can be trans (2) If the function of a statement would not be understood correctly in your language, add a sentence type that would express that function. -> Lord, **please heal me**, because I know you are able to heal me if you are willing to. (Matthew 8:2 ULT) +> Lord, if you are willing, **you are able to make me clean**. (Matthew 8:2 ULT) -The function of “I know you can” is to make a request. In addition to the statement, a request can be added. +The function of “you are able” is to make a request. In addition to the statement, a request can be added. -> > Lord, **I know you can heal me**. If you are willing, please do so**.** -> > -> > Lord, if you are willing, please heal me. **I know you can do so.** +> > Lord, you are able to make me clean. If you are willing, **please do so**. +> >OR: +> > Lord, if you are willing, **please heal me**. I know that you are able to do so. (3) If the function of a statement would not be understood correctly in your language, use a verb form that would express that function. @@ -66,6 +66,6 @@ The function of “I know you can” is to make a request. In addition to the st > > Son, your sins are forgiven. (Mark 2:5 ULT) > -> > Son, I forgive your sins. -> > -> > Son, God has forgiven your sins. +> > Son, I forgive your sins. +> >OR: +> > Son, God hereby forgives your sins.