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@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 Here the word "expectation" and the phrase "certain hope" mean basically the same thing. Paul uses them together to emphasize how strong his expectation is. AT: "I eagerly and confidently hope" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])
 
-# but with all boldness so that now as always Christ will be exalted
+# but that I will have complete boldness
 
-This is part of Paul's expectation and hope. AT: "but that I will be very bold now, as I always have been, and Christ will be exalted"
+This is part of Paul's expectation and hope. AT: "but that I will be very bold"
 
 # Christ will be exalted in my body
 
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The phrase "my body" is a metonym for what Paul does with his body. This can be
 
 # whether by life or by death
 
-"if I go on living or if I die"
+"whether I live or die" or "if I go on living or if I die"
 
 # For to me