From 12b0111d222ed9fed5c8942965b298b31044e073 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Wed, 28 Feb 2018 18:27:29 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] verse span snippet mismatch; consistency

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 1ch/25/28.md | 15 +++++++++++----
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/25/28.md b/1ch/25/28.md
index bcbff09630..c901504d25 100644
--- a/1ch/25/28.md
+++ b/1ch/25/28.md
@@ -1,8 +1,15 @@
-# the eighteenth ... the twenty-first
+# Connecting Statement:
 
-"lot number 18 ... lot number 19 ... lot number 20 ... lot number 21." This shows the order in which the families were chosen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
+This continues the list begun in [1 Chronicles 25:9](../25/09.md) of 24 lots that were cast to choose the order in which families would serve.
 
-# Hanani ... Mallothi ... Eliathah ... Hothir
+# the twenty-first
 
-Translate the names of these men as you did in [1 Chronicles 25:4](../25/04.md).
+This refers to the twenty-first lot. The word "lot" may be supplied here. Alternate translation: "the twenty-first lot" or "lot number 21" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
 
+# Hothir
+
+Translate the name of this man as you did in [1 Chronicles 25:4](../25/04.md).
+
+# twelve persons in number
+
+"12 people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])